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I just got the teacher feed back and I want you to fix my essay

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeTitle & Introduction

~An original and appropriate title is used. ~ The introduction starts generally and ends specifically. ~The topic of television is introduced/contextualized before the article is mentioned. ~The article title, source, and author are mentioned in the summary of the article. ~The audience, purpose, and tone are identified.

1_A thesis/purpose statement ends the introduction, which tells the reader what the body paragraphs will accomplish.

(teacher feedback) begin your essay with a general statement about the topic before introducing the article.

2-Body Paragraphs

~Body paragraphs have a clear topic sentence which identifies which strategy the writer will discuss. ~ topic sentence is supported with ample evidence from the article. ~Each example (quote) is integrated effectively. ~Each example is explained/analyzed clearly. ~Each body paragraph ends with a concluding sentence. ~Body paragraphs flow clearly from one to the next (logical progression/transitions used)

(teacher feedback) Work on your analysis. Right now, what follows your quotes is summary, not an analysis of how/why the quote is an example of that appe

3-Conclusion

~The conclusion starts specifically by restating the thesis. ~An overall evaluation of the article is provided without bringing up new points/information. ~The conclusion ends with a global statement.

(TEACHER FEEDBACK) Evaluate Greenfield’s use of strategies more explicitly.

4-Templates, Grammar, & MLA

~5-10 templates from They Say/I Say are underlined. ~Grammar mistakes do not prevent the reader from understanding the writer’s points. ~Proper MLA formatting is used.

(TEACHER FEEDBACK) Work on sentence structure and word choice.

FINALY

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