Please see below feedback.
DUE Friday Oct 10, 2014 by 5:00pm
Assignment the minimum length requirement of 10 pages:
(3 points will be deducted for each page that falls short of this requirement)
Proper use of current APA format
1 earned: Please note the format of level 2 headings – You need both level 1 and 2 headings
Content is supported by research
1 earned – reference more often throughout
Good development of ideas and concepts
Each level 1 heading should have at least 3 subtopics (for example if I use the level one heading of causes then I should discuss at least 3 causes). THe organization in general is very confusing. Also, I did not see you discuss overcoming the problem.
Grammar and spelling
Limited use of direct quotations (only use when absolutely necessary)
Work on connecting the sections.
The introduction should provide me with a solid understanding of what to expect in your paper