i am writing a essay about concealed carry guns on campus and the thesis statement is “People should not be allowed to carry concealed guns on college campuses in United States of America since it is likely to affect not only learning environment, mental health and behavior, but also it causes increased legal demands on colleges.” and i need to have a paragraph with two references. i wrote them down and my professor said it is all irrelevant. she said the background should define campus carry/ concealed carry, provide statics (how many campus shootings have happened in the past few decades, how many deaths and injuries etc), and show what state laws are currently. i used only one source to support but i need one more to support. i attached what i wrote for the background and source that i used. please edit or rewrite the background for full one page. and please use easy word like me. you don’t need to have date, student name, professor name on the top of the paper.
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