Professor’s comment on first draft:
However, since this Mod 2 essay is supposed to be analyzing the rhetorical strategies in Beyond Food, your essay could use some rearrangement. It is OK to provide a background paragraph on biohacking, but your essay should be mostly focused on how the film crafts its argument, particularly for the biohacking section. I love your rhetorical analysis section – just take it and integrate it with your summary of the film’s biohack section. Remember that your essay should make sense to and illustrate for your own reader who hasn’t seen the film. Finally, synthesize in as relevant the argument by Ludwig.